Saturday, January 29, 2011

थिएटर की सीट पे हम दोनों बैठे थे
और बीच में बस इक armrest की दूरी थी

मैं इस पार से तुम्हे देखता रहा जी भर
दो-इक बार तुम्हे छूने की कोशिश भी की

तुमने हँस के armrest उठा दिया था
बोली "बड़े बुद्धू हो तुम भी "

आज लगता है सच ही कहा था तुमने

6 comments:

Amrendra Narayan said...

Give me some sunshine, give me some rain,

I want to feel the heat, I want to feel the pain,

I want to, really want to, grow up once again.

just for once, only once, Can I be the 'buddhu' once again

Kafir said...

u don't need to grow up once again for all this. u just need to slow down :)

Maya said...

Well no matter what you say I feel this one is for sure real :)And I agree with the "writer" that the main "character" is buddhu.

Anyways..nice short read...brought a smile on my face (unlike most of your other posts that get me into the depths of pain). Dard to isme bhi hai...but this one has a soft romantic element that over rules the pain. As if...sub theek ho jayega...since the character has realised that he was being buddhu

Kafir said...

'I feel this one is for sure real'
sab maya hai........

there is always a cocktail of emotions in life, be it experience or emotions. what matters is what u have a taste for...
n i hope to write more romantic stuff in future...

Maya said...

Jai ho, romantic writing ki :)

Kafir said...

duniya jise kahte hain, jaadoo ka khilauna hai...
mil jaye to mitti hai kho jaye to sona hai...
n i am no exception